ok the professor just sent my paper back, I don’t understand why he keeps saying it wrong below is what he sent me:
You are making good progress. I have included some feedback on your paper. This is your proposal, not your prospectus, so you will need to use the qualitative checklist (attached) and qualitative dissertation guide. Use the headings in the checklist (Abstract,Introduction, etc.) in your paper. I can help you with your interview questions. They need to be framed around your issue and deterrence theory.
Please send your draft back when it is corrected and includes all of the sections in the checklist. The guide can help you as well.