This would be a good thesis for an argument, but for this essay, you are arguing which genre is best to use for the argument, based on what you have seen.
For instance, using the youtube video about opiod abuse is more effective than a newspaper article in reaching Gen Z because Gen Z connects better with onlinetechnology.
Rewrite and resubmit.
I wrote this thesis about cafeteria issue that I have done it before could u please re-edit the thesis
the question is how to re write the thesis
this is my old thesis : Thesis ASU cafeteria needs to be improved in terms of food quality, healthy options, and hygiene as it plays a major role in the student’s life on campus.
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